Yesterday in the morning Rooms 7,5 and 6 went to watch a person named Dr Ben Carson.He is a doctor.He's also known as the first person to seperate two twins heads joined together and have them survive. When we got there we had to sit outside for a little while and then we went inside to see Dr ben carson first we had a song . Called the duffy song. And then this man named henry he's the one that talked to us first. He was funny.
By Jhardae
12 comments:
Next time maybe you could write a little more. I mean, remember to put a space after a full spot. Other than that I liked what you typed, I atcually learnt something, about separating twins I never knew that could happen.
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Nicky
Hi Jharda'e your doctor Ben Carson story
is really intresting I like how you discribed your story KEEP THE GOOD WORK UP!!
From Caitlin
Hi Jhardae
I liked reading your story it is fantastic also maybe you could right a little more. But any ways keep up the great work.
By Isabella,
I ment full stop!
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Nicola
Hi Jharda'e
what a nice story. keep the work up.
Hey Jharda'e
your Dr Ben Carson story really is cool and I liked how you really stoped and thinked about how it was going. KEEP UP THE FANTASTIC WORK!!!
Hi Jhardae
Your Dr Ben Carson story looks very Interesting to read and i liked reading about the Dr Ben Carson trip. It looked fantastic .
Keep the great work up coming up onto your blog so we can comment on your blog and the rest of your class blog
I liked reading about it because it looked like it had describing words.
I liked it you used adverbs,describing words and adjectives.
I liked reading it i like the fantastic work coming up on your blog so Keep it up Jhardae
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Hi Jhardae
Your Dr Ben Carson story looks very Interesting to read and i liked reading about the Dr Ben Carson trip. It looked fantastic .
Keep the great work up coming up onto your blog so we can comment on your blog and the rest of your class blog
I liked reading about it because it looked like it had describing words.
I liked it you used adverbs,describing words and adjectives.
I liked reading it i like the fantastic work coming up on your blog so Keep it up Jhardae
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hi jharda'e...
I like your ben Carson story and i like how you have done a fantastic work. KEEP THE WORK UP.
By Germainw
Hi Jharda'e
I liked your Dr den carson story and it was funny by .
By alazay
hi Jhardae
i like your wonderful smile your story was interesting keep up
the good work.
hi Jharda'e
hi I like your Dr Ben Carson you wrote a great report and it is interesting.
by Ohsmar and andre
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