Room 7 Descriptive Writing

We had a picture of a tiny dragon to motivate us to write a description. Here is our writing.

Trip to the Botanical Gardens

Des Hunt visit

                                                                             Des Hunt

Des hunt came to visit us today. He used chemistry and physics to teach us about writing. He shared us some of the things he done when he was our age. I learnt that  chemistry was fun after all.

by Tai

A Visit from Des Hunt

The author Des Hunt came to visit us today.He used chemistry and physics to teach us about writing.He made it interesting and fun.

I learnt that writing is a game you don't know what is going to happen about writing.

by Mere

A Visit From Des Hunt

                     Des Hunt                    

                                                                                     

       Des Hunt came to visit us today. He used chemistry

 and physics to teach us about writing. He made it interesting and fun. I learnt that you need a good hook about writing.

By Riley

A Visit from Des Hunt

The author Des Hunt came to visit us today.He used chemistry and physics to show us how to make it fun.He also showed us some amazing science tricks and talked to us about what he wanted to be when he grows up.I learnt that you have to make your story interesting.

by Abdurrahman