The year has started with a lot of enthusiasm and excitement. This term we will be learning "All About Us". The school picnic is coming up and we can't wait to see what the rest of the year has in store for us.
Come and join us on our learning journey and PLEASE leave comments we love to hear from you!!!
This story is very good. Well written and well spoken. I don't think that the pictures quite match the story. As a suggestion perhaps you could draw simple pictures, photograph them, or scan these, and use them instead.
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This story is very good. Well written and well spoken. I don't think that the pictures quite match the story. As a suggestion perhaps you could draw simple pictures, photograph them, or scan these, and use them instead.
Well done though and keep at it.
Mr Johnston
I really liked your story and I could hear your loud voice,but the pictures did not match the pictures.
Teagan
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