07 March 2013

Shantay's Bio Poem



Shantay

Sporty, brave, kind & cheerful. 
Sibling of Marie, Joy, Rewatu, Waitama 
Lover of netball,money and family 
Who fears Snakes and big black spiders 
Who needs Money
Who gives happiness
Who would like to see famous people
Resident of Panmure


6 comments:

Jazmine said...

HI Shantay I loved how you used powerful words in your Bio Poem....

Jazmine said...

I like how you used powerful words in your bio poem and its funny because your scared of big black spiders.

Samantha said...

Hi Shantay


I really liked how you described what you were scared of and you really used powerful words. I also loved how you presented it well. Keep up the good work.

From: Samantha

alazay said...

Hi shantay

I love your Bio poem you have awesome
smile and you are a really awesome friend
and i like that you used describing words in your poem



from Alazay

Alazay said...

Hi Shantay

I love your Bio poem you have an awesome smile and you are a really awesome friend.But you need to proof read your work a bit more.
However I like that you used describing words in your poem.

From,
Alazay



From Alazay

mere said...

Hi shantay
I really like how you described your bio poem.You have done an awesome smile.Keep up the fantastic work.